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Wednesday, August 22, 2012

Feelers' Adventures In Jamaa (Story): Mira's Awakening



This is just Chapter 1 of a story I started writing today.

Yes, I know it's lame, but I just wanted to share it!

Chapter 1

    I felt the cool breeze in Sarepia, smelling the sweet thorned roses on the bush. My stomach grumbled. I was starving.
   
    Transformed into my bunny, I plucked some big blackberries from the bush, carefully placing them in my pouch to save for later.
   
    Suddenly, the smell came over me. A wolf? No, I couldn't match the scent. Another bunny? Not that either. I transformed into my wolf once more, and put my muzzle to the dirt, attempting to track the scent.
   
    The scent wasn't bad. It smelled like rare rose petals, not found around Jamaa much. It was unusual, and the scent seemed to be getting stronger.
   
    Bump. Ouch. My nose had hit a firepit. But... where did it come from? The rocks may have scattered in a circle, but they wouldn't budge when I kicked them. Wood was in the center of the pit. Not any kind of wood though, some bark I've never smelled before.
  
    Suddenly, everything went black.




12 comments:

  1. awesome! next time try writing a longer chapter cuz now i cant wait to hear the rest!

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  2. i liked your story.



    p.s to feelers ich leibe speck

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  3. cool story! just commenting to tell you to continue with it and ya its not lame. out of the little bit i read its btter then most other stories I've seen! "P.S. to Feelers: lch leibe speck."

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  4. I think it is a good story



    Papad91278's the glitch queen

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  5. Woah! It is very suspenseful at the end. I can't wait to see part two!
    ~Zebra ♥

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  6. O-O towards then i was like WOAH WHAT?! BLACK IS SHE KNOCKED OUT OR SOMTHING?!

    ~GreenLeafs

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  7. can someone tell me why people are writing those ps's ? i dont get what they say!

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    1. Oh you mean when they say P.S Ich liebe Speck?

      That means "I love bacon" in German :D

      Jam On!

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  8. Wow sweet! Can't wait to hear more...I mean if you're writing more.

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  9. I love it Feelers :DDD Can't wait for Chapter 2... Love Sonic :3

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  10. I like it from: sugarpanda106

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